Naruto; haohani

[hanashiro]

Image: (optional)
Name: haohani
Nickname: hao
Age: 14
Gender: M
Blood type: AB+
Home Village: konoha
Rank: genin
Eyes: black
Hair: long black hair tied into a low pony tail
Body: well muscled but not huge
Height: around 5’ 10”
Weight: 180
Description: extremely fast and strong nearly to chunin standards
Clothes: purple skin tight cloths with a gold dragon embroidery across it. Also wears a pair of special black ceramic scale gauntlets and shin guards
Weapons: thin Chinese sword with a 10 stranded blue tail.
Jutsu: kaimon kyumon (gates) : releasing the inner limits the users internal chakra circulates at a greater rate drastically increasing the physical prowess.
Element(s): water (afects movements not jutsu)
Bloodline: brute fighter: a family that has for many generations based their fighting on ending the fight the second it starts has beaten these values into their childern. as such over time the ofspring have devloped abilities that let them almost explode for a short period of time with extreamly intence energy but in doing so criple themselvs for long missions, none of the family has ever been asigned to long missions that would require more then one major fight.
Bloodline details:
explosive chakra :able to expend large amounts of chakra in instants causing very devastating results.
No pain: temporally makes hao immune to pain and his body takes no damage from it’s self due to strain. But a day after it is used the user can’t move without extreme pain.
rage: stops reasoning and just starts to atack things regardless of previous alignment, but with both explosive chakra and no pain efects. (about 5 min run time)
Personality: fun and care free. And relies as much on luck as skill it seams.
Family: father
Heroes: the jonin rock lee
History: trained from birth to be a most brutal fighter. hao has been taught that the only part of a fight that really matters is the first few seconds. Because of this philosophy he has been trained extensively in taijustsu and to move at such a rate so as to interrupt the others ninjutsu and to be able to not think and resist genjutsu. Unfortunately the later training while no doubt had excellent results has reduced his reasoning abilities quite a bit and may at times seams rather stupid.

[Suiken no Hatori]

...I don't get this...
What is your jutsu description???
And everyone has elemental chakra.

[hanashiro]

every one has it but not most don't know what it is.

and those are the are the gates. they all have the same discription.

[Suiken no Hatori]

...right...
Kouen is the mod for this RP, so he'll need to approve.

[Batman001]

So is it a chick or a guy? O_o

[hanashiro]

thats for you to dicide. but it does say he

[Batman001]

xD My bad
But here's a suggestion for a char description
[Edited for Naruto rp'n]

Spoiler:

Image: (optional)
Name: (your character's name)
Nickname: (their nickname, if they have one)
Age: (their age)
Gender: (their gender)
Date of Birth: (their date of birth)
Home Village: (their home village)
Eyes: (describe their eyes. basically just color)
Hair: (describe their hair. color, style, etc...)
Body: (describe their body. stuff like thinness, skin color, muscular, etc...)
Height: (their height)
Weight: (their weight)
Description: (their description. ex: fast, strong, etc...)
Clothes: (describe their clothes)
Weapons: (their weapons, if they have any)
Special Techniques/Attacks: (their special attacks, if any)
Bloodline: (name of their bloodline, if any)
Bloodline details: (Details about your bloodline)
Bounty: (If your wanted or not)
Personality: (their personality)
Hobbies: (their hobbies)
Likes: (what they like)
Dislikes: (what they dislike)
Family: (their family, alive and dead)
Heroes: (their heroes, if any)
Dreams: (their dreams, what they want to accomplish in the future)
History: (their history, what happened in their past. this is a major part of your bio)
And any additional information you want.

[hanashiro]

there all fixed

[Batman001]

About time woman :/
/kidding

[Monkey D. Luffy]

Err...this is the template Kouen had made for this RP:

Spoiler:

What needs to appear on your characters bio:

Name

Age

Appearance (Doesn't need to include clothes, since one can change clothes
every day)

Village

Rank (Must start at AS or Genin)

Elemental Chakra (Wind, Water, Fire, Earth, Lightning)

Bloodline: (MUST BE ORIGINAL! I will NOT accept Sasuke/Neji/Naruto rip-ofs, also, Demons are stricly forbidden!)

Jutsu (What jutsu your character knows, one can start with up to 6 or 7)

Of course it doesn't matter to have a more elaborate template, but the things Kouen listed have to be included, and your template it missing rank (although it's obvious it is Genin because it has to be) and elemental chakra. Still we need to wait for Kouen to comment though anyway and say if there's any problems with the character or anything. He has to be the one to approve it, since he made the RP.