Bleach RP:

[Luffy-Kaizokuou]

Name: Yuushin, Kiritateruki

Age: 217 (real age: 17)

Description: has the basic Shinigami outfit, except he also has a gray long coat over it and he waers long shorts that look like jeanshorts that are past his knee's. He also has shoe's instead of slippers. He has Brown hair and looks young for his age. Also always has a toothpick in his mouth. wears a Hat like Urahara but it doesn't curve down and there are no lines, it is Black with White Slashes.

Division: 3rd division

Rank: 5th seat...i don't want him too weak or too strong...tell me if i should lower it tho...

Zanpakutou: Souseimaru (dense growth....maru :P)
Awakening phrase: "LET'S GO, SOUSEIMARU!"

-Sealed:

Spoiler:

the spikes are sharp...

-Incarnation: smart (only sometimes) and very moody. Wears all white and black cloak and has blonde hair and sunglasses.

-Shikai:

Spoiler:

it's abilities are that it can grow or shrink at the users will, also it can grow in, for instance,only length or only width. the speed of that depeds on the speed of the user. (obviosly i want my guy to be speed based instead of strength based)

Bio: He was a high school student, he was a loner and he was really cool but everyone ignored him. As he grew up and always liked people, even if they did not like him. One day he met a person who acknowladged him. They where very good friends until.....his friend died. he slowly started noticing things. He slowly started to see ghosts. Later when he was 17, he was in the Bank. A man pulled out a gun. "this IS A HOLD UP" the man said as his friend came into the door. His friend had no gun, but he had a knife. Yuushin hated to see people die, he had made a decision. He jumped up onto the man with the knife's back and grabbed the knife in one motion. "what the..." Yuushin pulled the knife into the robber then he felt a sharp pain in his back, he was shot, he turned around and threw the knife in a last, desperate attack before losing conciousness. He died in the hospital that night. When he reached the soul society he was noticed by a Shinigami by his incredible Spirit energy. When he entered the acadmy he noticed that he had the same feeling around a few Shinigami that he had the night his friend died. He found out that his friend was killed by a Shinigami that was bloodthirsty. that Shinigami was confirmed missing and never seen again. the Man Had INCREDIBLE Spirit energy which caused yuushin to slowly start being able to see ghosts. He decided to find that man and kill him one day. (his great fighting skills are partly from not only his spirit energy but also from beig picked on/mugged so much, he had to learn to fight back)

[Monkey D. Luffy]

Approved.

Though, you're supposed to, under the Zanpakutou section, state the like, phrase, that changes it to shikai. What I mean is like, for example, Abarai Renji says "Roar, Zabimaru!" I believe. So add that in and it's good.

[Luffy-Kaizokuou]

done i'll start now ^_^

added part of reason for great fighting skills

added shikai form pic...